Stranded

Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 12:01 am

"Where did they come from!?" Rick asked as he ran over to the scream.
"They were taping us!" Shouted Leslie again.
"Oh Dear." At that point Holly had woken up and the crew saw her.
"Hey, what's Ms. Diamond doing here!"
"Grab her!" One of them shouted as another one grabbed her and took her away.
"Holly!" Rick shouted.
"Help!" Holly shouted back as the door closed.
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:08 am

Bit, please refrain from script. Its hard to read, and can be confusing.
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As Scout stood there, watching the whole thing, something clicked. "Oh EPA." she said. "What is it?" asked Hannah. "How many people do you think are watching us right now?"

Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:47 am

"from all of the other realiaty shows that i've seen i'd say about oh 1.5 million give or take a few thousand" michcal said "theres two things i never go anywhere without gum and duck tape " he said as he pulled a roll of duck tape out of his pocket " do you have a plane or boat in there to?" one of the girls asked sarcasticly " no, no electronics those are electric" michcal with sadness in his voice
" dang it" another girl said " well back to the point i can duck tape the cammeramen to the ground and steal their cammeras if you want me to "
everyone else just had a ... look on their face
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 9:29 am

Warrior, the way your doing is much harder to type. Scripct format is a bit easier. I'm not a super-fast typer and script mkaes it so i dont have to use quotation marks. I dont see anything wrong with script
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 3:37 pm

Its more confusing, and harder to convey actions and emotions. Plus, it prevents you from going into detail.

Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 4:30 pm

No it does not.
A01: blah blah
Then he spotted a blah blah blah filled with the msot delicous blah blah.. Thats not preventing detail ( lol in a way )
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:07 pm

Back to the story.
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"Uh.. guys?" said Scout. "I just remembered something. Those contracts we signed before we came here said something about that by us signing it, we agreed to allow our images and voices to be released on national television. So if we take action against them now, they'll probably sue." Everyone frowned and Lee said "Well that stinks."

Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:27 pm

"I agree. Hey Lee? I found another puppy, and I was wondering if the boys cabin wanted it?" Leslie said.
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:46 pm

before lee could answer michcal said " awesome a puppy! i'll take him!"
" ok " leslie said while laughing and she handed the puppy to michcal
" he guys what should we name him?" michcal asked the boys cabin
"how about mikle he has michcals eyes and lee's hair color?" alex said
" cool i like it!" rick said " yea it is pretty cool" brandon said
michcal and lee looked at eachother and nodded " awesome!" they said together
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 6:57 pm

" This could be my big break ! " Hannah yelled. Hannah was just about to sing when Scout said " We need to find a way to stop Ed! " .
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:04 pm

"shhhh!" remember the cameras are still watching and listening we need a plan to get off this island and i think there's something specal about holy! how did she know there was a huricane coming? there's no electronincs on the island so it couldn't of been a weather tower plus she looked like something was chasing her when we first found her! we need to find a plan to get holly and us off this island!"
michcal said in a hushed tone with urgencey in his voice
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Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 7:40 pm

"He's right." said Scout. "Lets just go about like we normally do, and talk in private when we can." Everyone nodded. "So what do you guys want to do now?" asked Brandon. Scout grinned as she thought of something extremely childish. She darted up to Brandon, and with a giggle shouted, "Tag, you're it!" Everyone laughed and took off running.

Subject: Re: Stranded Tue Oct 14, 2008 8:12 pm

while the cameras were watching the other cabin mates play tag there were only two not playing michcal and leslie they were packing up all the backpacks with evertything they could fit in them rope personal belongings trinkets drawings even the bed sheetsthen thay made makeshift backpacks with teh empty pillow casesonce they were done leslie called teh girls into the cabin and then michcal did the same they locked all teh doors and windows before the cameras could see anything
the plan had begun
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